Sun-filled
Standing on the edges of summer
I feel you smile
Through your hand
As it holds onto mine
Your heart beats in tune with mine
The air, for living
Life in full swing
I
Love you
In this sunshine
This trip is long enough to spend a word
Or to on you
I watch all over
Again...
Watch all comes true
Your kisses washing me
Warmth
Like the sun
Apples and my rainbow with sweet sleepy
Lazy dog days
The edges of silk
As your lips dance upon mine
Face, and, finding
Face, and, finding
And, finding
Your love
These are the days when the words
Are soft with sunlight
I'm encompassed with your love
In these sun-filled days
Steven Mels
Author notes
Thank you my friend.
Written May 18th, 2006
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Ahhhhh sumer love, what a delicious expression of love. Absolutely adored the lines:
I feel you smile
Through your hand
An observation only capable by the spirit of a true lover. You never cease to amaze me with the volumes you can write on this subject. You have quickly become my favorite love poet! -
VERY BEAUTIFUL
Now this is more like you, the beautifully touching words that show your heart.
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Well, here you go again...another simply delightful love poem! You have a slightly jaunty little rhythm here that says "romping in the meadow" to me. Outstanding images, too. A really lovely write and a great read!
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Beautiful. Whoever you wrote this for is one lucky person to have such a loving friend as you.
Susan
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Well well. Who's this too? Very good...no...it's GREAT!
Wonderful. Keep it flowing.
Tawni -
keep this up you will have books galore published, nice write here, thank you for sharing and good luck..Linda
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Beautifully written!!!!! :F
My awesome and gorgeous Son:
This is truly a beautiful write, the sun shines through and the love and purity pours throughout.....
I am very pleased to see that you are finally trying to brighten you life and let love in your heart.....
Me sweet dear Steven, I thank you for sharing yout beautiful words and thoughts with this old lady called MoM
God bless you and guide you always,
I love you, MoM! -
Steven,
This is so very nicely written! Your heart shines forth within every line and you know, that's a beautiful thing!
Thank you for sharing you!
Love ya, hon!
Sandy -
Goodolenad thank you much for reading and commenting on my words.
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simply wow, love is just pouring off of every word, it's wonderously beautiful!
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Choirangel thank you much on the read and comment. i am glad you enjoyed it. thank you again.
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and that is a good thing that you are, this was a well done heartwarming write, thanks for sharing and keep up the awesome poetry...
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beat thank you much for the words you have left here. and thank you much for reading my words.
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Can you feel the love tonight? I bet you did when penning this little piece
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blondone awe hey thank you much i am glad you liked it.
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outstanding !!! this is so good and your love shines with these words you write...
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kryspin thank you much for reading and commenting on my words.
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i like the line standing on the edge of summer. im trying to place where i heard that before.... lol
good write. keep penning
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