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Hidden Magpies

 




hidden magpies
fly together from a tree ~
a Murder revealed


 


 

Author notes

A group of Magpies is known as a Murder
Written May 18th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 20, 2006
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    Nice job!

    hidden magpies
    fly together from a tree ~
    a Murder revealed

    A very interesting plot here! I liked this piece! Great haiku! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! Best wishes in the contest! Debi

  • JadeFlame
    May 19, 2006
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    Awesome write. I, too, craved a bit more after reading it. Great job and good luck in the contest!


  • cute mayoush
    May 19, 2006
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    WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    HEHEHEHEHE
    MISSED UR HAIKU DIXIE
    BUT HEY WHAT A HAIKU THIS WAS
    IT FLOWED SO FAST MADE ME ASK FOR MORE
    TOOO BAD HAIKU IS ONLY 3 VERSES LONG...HEHEHEHE

    MAYOUSH