Here are my words
sent strait from my heart
to kill your hope
cheers now it's time to swallow your tears
you didn't love me anyway...
so cling to your books and kiss your cross
cause i wont be coming back
Does it hurt?
well, i hope so!!
this was meant to tarnish your sleep
i never knew "I'm leaving"
would cut you so deep
so cling to your books and kiss your cross
cause i wont be coming back
tears are smearing the words that were written on my face
are they yours or mine?
my eyes will never be the same...
i hope you're happy now!
so cling to your books and kiss your cross
cause i wont be coming back
This was meant to kill your faith
I hope this bleeds it dry...
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Written May 18th, 2006
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are you talking about the title? that my dear is personification. this was not a poem about someone killing herself it was a poem about killing someone's hope and faith.
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but why? That’s the question I was left with at the end. Maybe it’s in there somewhere and I’m just not seeing it. But I hate being left guessing. I’m the kind of person that hates watching a movie that ends with a cliffhanger. Otherwise…good use of repeats and emotion. Good job.
Coral
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