I remember the day You and I first met.
A day You and I will never forget.
It was early spring a chill was in the air.
The wind was blowing through your golden hair.
You smiled at Me I smiled at You.
I felt a pain and I knew it was true.
An Arrow had pierced My Heart through and through.
That's when I knew I was in Love with You.
I didn't even know your name.
Where You were going or from where You came.
My Heart kept pounding like a drum inside'
I ask your name and told You mine.
You told me your name and then you just smiled.
I ask if I could walk with You for awhile.
You began to walk I was by your side.
You and I both knew things would be allright.
Days weeks and months went by.
Where ever You went I was by your side.
As the days went by our Love grew stronger.
We both knew we could wait no longer.
You and I were married on an early spring day.
You and I knew our Love was here to stay.
Now you and I are happy in a world all our own.
And Baby thats where You and I belong.
Author notes
This was from real life Mine.
Hope you like it.
This was some of the happiest years of my life 38 years .
A contest entry
- AN OPTIONS CONTEST EDITED by Darc Soul.
300 points, ended March 24, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Partners in crime group please by Partners In Crime.
450 points, ended March 18, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love and Emotional by Razor-Blade Romance.
1000 points, ended June 18, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love At First Sight by celadia.
900 points, ended November 6, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Real life love poems are the best ones to read. Thank you so much for sharing this with me and congratulations on your wonderful tropheys.
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Wouldn't it be nice if all love was like this! Good for you!!! Lovely poem! Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck! I'm honored to have you show your work here!
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Absolutely beautiful...love at first sight that held on so tight...
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beautiful! this is so sweet!
good luck
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congratulations on all the trophies. It seems you captured the rainbow and have one of every color. It is so very romantic and filled with love. great job and thank you for entering
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I love this, it's just what I was looking for, I like the whole thing, the story part and the emotion part, I can think of no way to improve this, it's just right how it is, thank you for entering my contest.
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very romantic and the rhyme was pretty good. Congrats on the other trophies and thank you for entering
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Beautiful....
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Beautiful
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A beautiful poem.
Really entwinded me into the piece.
A gorgeous set of emotions and description for a loved one.
Well Done !
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i really like the last stanza! this poem is POWERFUL! stunning job! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Just beautiful, i admire people who found true love that lasts.
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One day your strangers and the next thing you know your dedicating your lives to eachother. Loved it.
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I love this, very heartwarming
May 18 is my husband and mines aniversary. 23 years this year Good luck in the contest
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Now stop that negative thinking, something bad doesn't have to be on it's way! But despite how much I chide you, I also am that way...I always assume happiness will end in some type of despair...lol
But I'm glad you are happy now...and I won't wait for any negative poems from your pen, I'll just think positive.
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Awwww this is lovely...true love at first sight feels so good....and you brought it on my screen with this wonderful poem
Lovely
Hope love is still around you
XXJeannette
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awe lovely, thanks so much for sharing
best of luck
Tasha
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This is special I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest
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How very nice to have an enduring love and know it is the real thing right off...You are one lucky person...not every one can have what you have...Good luck in the contest.....by the way, I like how it is written also..
It is just very easy to read...Thank you...
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Awww, this is so sweet. It's a wonderful feeling, love. And when the right one is here, why look further.
A nice, warm fuzzy feeling poem.
Good luck in the contest
Oh... there's a typo in the first line of the last stanza
Dee
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Awww. This is soo beautiful. I really love it.
thanks for sharing
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I love your poem.
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WOW i really loved this poem you did a excellent job on this and i enjoyed reading it it flowed really beatifully and the emotions were great keep up the great job and thanks for sharign with all of us here on allpoetry
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Wow this is a really good write! You're right it is something I didn't really expect lol...It's better than what I expected. This is a good example of a real true loving relationship. You did a great job on this...Love it & love you too, Jessica.
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Thanks for the comment on my poem I welcome you as a friend
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Amazing
very good write and are you pregnant??? Because that would be the cutest thing ever if you were you got ur man and u got a baby!!! Do you mind if I add you to my friends list?
*Wishy*
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