destructive wind storms -
swift and forceful - rarely last
longer than a day
Author notes
Written May 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest (Results being corrected-- This contest is closed. ) by Dreamy Green Eyes.
300 points, ended May 27, 2006, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Another brilliantly penned, powerful piece! I love the references here. It can easily apply not just to the obvious forces on nature, but to the destructive pursuits of humanity as well. Fantastic! Blessings, Gypsy
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Nice job!
destructive wind storms -
swift and forceful - rarely last
longer than a day
Good imagery in this piece... Nice haiku! Thanks for sharing your wonderful work! Best wishes in the contest!
Debi
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But the aftermath can take a while to clean up...
Just a thought.
I love your Haiku poetry. This is another really great one.
The imagery is beautiful in a natural sense and for how it can be a metaphor for emotional states and personal disasters...
Also it seems to create a healthy perspective...."this too shall pass"... -
Great natural imagery here Keep writing, this was a wonderfully simple haiku
Thanks for your comment
All the best
Pozo
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