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rap #1

Now this is my life
And im gon do what I want
I gotta get out this town
And be number one

Ive been livin the life
That aint made foe me
Now I aint gonna hide from Who im suposta be
This lil country ass town cant handle me
Im gonna get in the game
I gotta make some money

I am who I am
im just keepin it real
damn girl why don’t you just chill
see I may be young
im only 16
but trust me boy that don’t change a damn thing

see im ready to go
I got a plan foe me
Im gonna puff on that dro
While im countin my dough

Please don’t worry bout me
Cuz im gon be alright
I cant be touched
Put up a hell of a fight

See cuz im a girl whos got her own game
I wont put up   wit no lying ass lames
Sometimes I feel like my life is burnin in flames
Cuz its always full of so much pain

That’s why im ready to go
aint on this pain no moe
sometimes I just wish I was 6 feet below
you know nothin bout me now I aint no hoe

Author notes

it aint finished yet and its kinda weak still its my first rap got any tips hit me up k peace
Written May 18th, 2006

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  • ShadowEyes
    May 18, 2006
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    good job!

    hey, this is good! I love it! It's not weak at all! It's truthful and very good! I love it! Keep up the good work!

    >crimson<