I love you
I told you many times
I love you too
You replied those times
Then you turn around to tell me
That there’s no way it can be
We’re apart you and I
The physical distance is more than a mile
With tears shimmering in my eyes
I know not the reply
Though it’s not wise
I told you I was willing to try
You turn to me again
Baby, there’s nothing to gain
You tell me it cannot be
Why can I not see?
Leaving my hear in pieces
You turned and walked away
From the love I offered
And the chance I was willing to take
That chance is no more
I dare not try
To give my love away
And risk my heart
To be shattered once more
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Written May 18th, 2006
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Just reading again, that is supost to be a greate complement
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Excellent
Wonderfull sad words well said
That chance is no more
I dare not try
To give my love away
And risk my heart
To be shattered once more
Love the ending
I am sure you will find lasting love -
i'm zooming.
are you always this poetic, Bryce? it's something that i needed to. i write what i feel for all to see. it gets it out of the system. thanks with s
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NO PARKING!
TOO often, It seems I've succumbed.To less than admrable compulsions driven by the furiously reprhenshible machine of mine...
What a good poem, my thought, as if you see my soul and the pain I hold!
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