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Our Love~~

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His smile:
That smile saying, "I've missed you, baby"
When he comes home at the end of the day
His smile melts my loving soul daily
And soothes my every trouble away

His eyes:
The eyes that speak volumes, like reading a book
Holding me captive, his love in me grows
Telling me, "I love you"...with just one look

And his gazes belong to me, he shows

His touch:
Those loving, gentle, caring hands, hold me
And caress me each and every night
The touch of pure love, traces me softly
And within my own hands, he feels so right

Her heart:
The one that beats melodies to my own
What I hear at night til' the early morn
Her beauty within, makes my heart her home
And she's my sunrise, and I feel reborn

Her whispers:
As a song bird of love, she sings in tune
And all my life, I've awaited her voice
She comforts my soul, beneath each blue moon
And then my spirit begins to rejoice

Her hands:
Soft as the silky sheets we lay upon
Love within each caress of tenderness
How her hands give me, the peace to be strong
Her affection I love, I must confess

Our Love:
The lifetimes we share, are so beautiful
Each one captivating the others heart
Each day we drift in love so wonderful
And our love shall never ever depart

I love him~
I love her~

And this is the way we share deep within
And always we'll share this love will endure...

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"Strawberries and Vanilla" <<< Contest Rules.
Written May 18th, 2006

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 22, 2006
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    We thank you for your comment!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Rele anmwe
    May 22, 2006
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    I think you are going to win my trophy. I should be very mad at you but I am not going to. I honestly think your poem is very beautiful. Anyway, Good luck to you in the contest. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing it as well. You have a bless day


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 22, 2006
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    Thanks Timmmy, always enjoy when ya read a bit of Daddy!

    Much love, Timothy And Sandy~


  • poeticpieces
    May 20, 2006
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    AWESOME!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We thank you so much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 19, 2006
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    We thank you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Pipster
    May 19, 2006
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    this is a wonderfully emotional, creative piece... i too know the feelings and emotions of love and you doa brilliant job of depicting something that is so unexplainable... great write and best of luck in the contest!!!


  • MoonHaze
    May 19, 2006
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    This is really good and I loved the picture it gave it a wonderful touch!! I loved the whole thing, I can't pick out my favorite part. I read like 10 times to try and find one but I can't. The whole thing is GREAT! Amazing job!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Awww thank you so much!


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    May 18, 2006
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    Magic simply Magic~

    Dearest Poeticweaver & Wandering Angel~
    How your love bursts forth
    In tenfold loveliness
    Love in glory and richness
    A love as this is blessed
    Delicate in violet perfume
    As you light enduring love
    In all our summer rooms
    What happiness in your words
    A renewal of loves sweet mirth
    Beautifully penned in your hearts of heaven.
    This is truly what all of us seek
    A love to fill us eternally
    A love that fills our hearts
    Knowing that true love never parts
    Best of luck to both of you in the contest.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so much!


  • Hope2MakeIt
    May 18, 2006
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    ok--so i have completely melted here. this is awesome and a love like most only dream of. thank you for sharing this with me. hope2makeit


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you!!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    We thank you for your thoughts!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Awwww thank you!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    We thank you so very much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you very much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so very much!


  • Sunkissedrose
    May 18, 2006
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    Beautifully written. Ah, how i long for my husband to take lessons from this poem. Such a wonderful collaboration, smooth and flawless. Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and thanks for making me smile. Great Write.
    ~Carrie


  • FlamingPoet6887
    May 18, 2006
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    that was beautiful...excellent job. i love hearing about people being in love...its great. good luck in the contest.


  • DarkenedDreams
    May 18, 2006
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    I love...... omg I love this poem...... you can write a lot better then I can..... your poems are soooooo ful of emotion and passion that it is over filling a soul...... keep on writeing your poems.... b/c I am really eager to read them.....
    Allways and forever
    DarkenedDreams

  • thunder-rain
    May 18, 2006
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    Terrific!!!

    Awwww... how sweet! I absolutly love this poem, it is so cute how you both love each other! You two seem made for each other and i can tell just by your poem! it is so sweet! keep writing poems like this. Have fun with each other and charish your love
    God bless


  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    May 18, 2006
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    At the end, it reads "ours love" . . . did you mean "our love"?

    This piece was absolutely brilliant! Beautiful, inspiring true love and trust! Well done!

    Keep penning . . . keep sharing . . . and much luck to you in the contest as well as any and all future poetic ventures!

    Maggie


  • twilight seduction
    May 18, 2006
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    I'd say that this is very lovely and nice, but it could be better if you make it where it seems each type of sense is responding to the other one, in a his/hers fashion. It is very sweet and sensual, very truthful, I think, for many well fitting couples.


  • FallingDeep
    May 18, 2006
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    incredible

    This is amazing. No doubt one of the best love poems i've ever read. I really enjoyed how it shows both the male and female points of view. And how I relate to it. I think everyone can find some way to relate to this. The background and picture go with the piece perfectly. An absolutely great read.

    Always,
    Chelsea
    <3


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 18, 2006
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    Excellent

    Wow, womderfull colorabation of words

    Nothing less than Excellent


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Awwww thank you!


  • knitonepearlone
    May 18, 2006
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    This is wonderfull, a great tribute to your love for each other.


  • Elfin
    May 18, 2006
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    what a beautiful love token for each other,the sentiment and words are truly lovely. This for me is a winner so well done and good luck in the contest.Val.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    We thank you!!!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Very good. I really enjoy reading collabs tht you do. Much luck to both of you in this contest.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you so much!

  • verses on flesh
    May 18, 2006
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    This is a very beautiful write, both of you. I especially love the layout of it, very inventive. Thank you so much for sharing such a loving and wounderful piece.

    jamie


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you very much

  • Poet-treeman
    May 18, 2006
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    What a wonderfully descriptive poem of an appreciation and intimate knowledge of the object of one's love.


  • RockinToyotaChick
    May 18, 2006
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    Simply The Best!

    This has to be the most wonderful, rich in emotion, poem I have ever read! You are so lucky to have found love! (I keep looking!) This is so beautiful! There aren't enough superlatives to describe how this struck me! It hit a nerve!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you!!! We appreciate you!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you!!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you very much!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you!!!!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    We appreciate you!
    poeticweaver and Wandering Angel


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Ours Love:
    The lifetimes we share, are so beautiful
    Each one captivating the others heart
    Each day we drift in love so wonderful
    And our love shall never ever depart


    I love him~

    I love her~


    Great journey of the heart here touching the depth of the eternal love as well.An exceellent work indeed..


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you for your thoughtful comment!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Awwwww thank you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thank you!!!
    poeticweaver and Wandering Angel


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Timothy and I thank you so very much!
    Wandering Angel and poeticweaver


  • KatieMarie
    May 18, 2006
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    Cute

    Awe! How cute. This was really from your heart and you can tell. You have a great way to put things into words. Keep it up... God Bless YOu in all you do. Katie


  • Kalexi
    May 18, 2006
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    Totally beautiful, and filled with amazing love

    A great collab

    Hugs
    Karen


  • starwing
    May 18, 2006
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    rhis was a sweet wrtie,,,,you felt the love in it.... very good penning and many more in the future....peace...shzoosy


  • Shakes-spear
    May 18, 2006
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    This is great and another one of your best! You are getting better, even though you were great in my eyes all the time! The Shaker

  • arabianqueen
    May 18, 2006
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    i luv ur poem

  • Tokersdream
    May 18, 2006
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    wow! I loved it! Absolutly loved it!! It was so strong and so true. If all love qwas that way it would be perfect n the world and everyone would have a happy ending. Keep up the good work and let me know if you write any more poems on love.

  • southern kisses
    May 18, 2006
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    Awesome very speechless of how great this is!!!I love this!! Congrats!!


  • crisofcross
    May 18, 2006
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    What a wonderful feeling. Everything in him reminds you how much you are deeply inlove with him. Something that no time can erase and will always stay forever. Honestly, with that, even I will do anything for him. Good luck in the contest.


  • Wandika gold member
    May 18, 2006
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    A lovely tribute to one another. You'll be tying the knot before we know it.

    Jim


  • honey bear
    May 18, 2006
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    wonderfull

    a very lovely poem full of love and deep feelings ,wonderfull thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest this is a very lovely poem an di am only sorry that i cannot applaud as i must keep my points for contest prizes at the moment .


  • magicalprincess
    May 18, 2006
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    POWERFUL LOVE~

    Excellent works!
    This collab is flawless, keep them coming!

    -Me

  • poeticpieces
    May 18, 2006
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    PERFECT FLOW!

    -awe- I love this you two, great job, and Dad, what can I say, you always amaze me with your weavings. The best to you in the contest, me thinks you'll do awesome!

    Love your son, lil Tim~


  • LionessK silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    Very impressive collaboration.. I could feel love in the words. This is truly a beautiful and inspiring write.. every line, every feeling.. wonderful job, both of you
    ~Kristy


  • gullionmar
    May 18, 2006
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    great piece of writing here great imagery keep up the wonderful writing


  • N e a r
    May 18, 2006
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    "Her hands:
    Soft as the silky sheets we lay upon
    Love within each caress of tenderness
    How her hands give me, the peace to be strong
    Her affection I love, I must confess"

    This is my favorite stanza. A well written piece that shows a lot of emotion, and it's displayed so perfectly in its format. Your rhyme is very flowing (definitely not forced), and the sttle you used is very secure and held tightly togteher. The words really show that both lovers feel so deeply towards one another. Very sweet, and quite a beautiful work of art. Good luck in the contest!

  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 18, 2006
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    Thanks Sandy for penning with me once again, we're getting better, heehee! Much love sweet soul, and me loves ya!

    -Timothy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 18, 2006
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    We thank you so much!
    Timothy and Sandy


  • victoria Secret
    May 18, 2006
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    All I can say is wow. Speechless. What an excellent write. You seem to amaze poor ol me every time. Awsome. I love your talent. Your way of writing. Your use of wordings, flows, and rhymes. You are wonderful. Keep penning. For you know me, I'll keep on reading. Take_Care. Muhc-Luv. Love me.

    victoria


    Edited on May 18, 4:39 because ''.

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