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bright sun shimmering

bright sun shimmering
sudden dark clouds form cover
cool summer shower

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one of my many attempts at writting haiku.
Written May 18th, 2006

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  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 21, 2006
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    Great job!

    bright sun shimmering
    sudden dark clouds form swift cover
    cool summer shower


    Beautiful job with this haiku! I love your use of imagery in this piece! Goes great with the picture also... Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! Best wishes in the contest! Debi


  • wings of an angel
    May 18, 2006
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    Very nice write good luck in the contest


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    May 18, 2006
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    very pretty ,keep poeting, thank you for sharing..
    Linda