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Sparkling love

My eyes waters for one I have faultier my heart goes silent the sickness wasn't’t to be so strong my arms where you’re healing pillars

Now all we share were the good and the bad times
Every time…

Every time…

Every time my tears fell you where there to catch them

I need you by my side

Please don’t go

Please don’t leave me here

For once my heart did beat slow I didn't’t want to let you go

Fears creeping in

Every time…

Every time I held you we were warm my heart beat would soothe you

But now the sprinkling shine is our chime on the earth

Because every time we where together I wanted it to last

The memories we had to make

The ones we shared

Can’t you hear my heart beat?

I…I can’t let you go

You where everything

The reason I lived the reason I smiled the reason for my existence

For now I kneel here

Holding you in my arms yet my tears wont stop falling

Just take me with you I am your castle

Where you hide from the pains of life there you are safe till the end.

Author notes

one thing i hate more than argueing...is holding back on my feelings...

the one thing i fear is loseing someone i care about
worse them leaveing not knowing how much they mean to me...
Where you hide from the pains of life there you are safe till the end

dam i hate feeling insecure its a shame there is one thing definite in life


Written May 18th, 2006

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  • forbidden-colour
    May 19, 2006
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    Lovely peice kurt.
    I wish i could've played a bigger part in your life.
    But I always see, to screw things up
    nice poem honey
    x


  • Missing-my-heart
    May 18, 2006
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    well it's been ages and meh here we go ^^