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Dawn Delight

sun rising slowly
glistening the morning dew
songbirds thrilling trills

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Written May 18th, 2006

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  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    May 21, 2006
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    Nice haiku!

    sun rising slowly
    glistening the morning dew
    songbirds thrilling trills

    Beautiful imagery!! A haiku tongue-twister! I enjoyed this piece! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! best wishes in the contest! Debi


  • Jillybean128
    May 20, 2006
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    Beautiful early morning description! Love the yellow page!! Good luck!