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Beach Umbrella

Eye am labeled perfectly,
Meaning I suffer from a irregularity,
Or more so labeled brilliantly,
To see the world so differently,
I have my frowns, but consider them,
Optimal genius from which I can creatively,
Nurture every possibility,
All of which belong to me,
Lunar eclipse in mood swings,
Lure out the rare masterpiece,
Y do you think I stopped going to counseling?

Unable to control my emotionality
Now I take a bow and,
Show you here what it means,
To be the ultimate jelly bean
And still wear the crown,
Be that is it may, I consider myself
Lovely in,
Every way,

=

Be the
Perfect
Disability!!!!

Author notes

Ok so I know 'eye' and 'y' wasn't used properly, but I couldn't break the words they spell vertically or resist to start the poem with me so I had to improvise, hope that's ok, if not I will find a way to change it
Written May 17th, 2006

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  • HeWillAlwaysBeAFool
    May 22, 2006
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    This made me laugh. Especially where you wrote about what it means to be the ultimate jelly bean! tee hee!
    Awesome job. Emotionally Unstable... Hmmm... Wouldn't guess that by the title.
    Interesting and awesome job!
    ~Sarah

  • blunt
    May 20, 2006
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    Hi my angel.You truelly are special,not just coz I love you but because you take crap and turn it into gold.You even did it with me!!!!Love you always and always.


  • Heartofacircle
    May 17, 2006
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    You are able to overcome this, and that is always a good thing, you did very well at this piece, thanks for sharing, best of luck in this contest..


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 17, 2006
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    this is cute really. i never thought about it all this way but now i won't be able to stop. thank you for entering this into my contest and i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie