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Dreams of perfection

I see you with your heavenly blue eyes and
think I deserve not your affection.
All in my life would suddenly be of pure joy
if you had love for me,
Or so I think.
Some think I am beautiful,
But my beauty can never compare to yours.
I open my eyes out of the dream.
I have not said a word.
I scream in my dreams...... say something.
A loss of thought and nothing comes to me.
I dream
I love
I look for you.
Only in my dreams I see you loving me too.

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Written May 17th, 2006

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  • xUnseenLovex
    October 23, 2006
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    Very good write, i don't know whether it is written on true feelings or if you just made it up but good all the same.
    Keep up the good work,
    Cprl Kleg


  • yours to hold
    May 17, 2006
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    I know how you feel! I always look at this guy I liked and think he'll never like me back. And he still doesn't, but I know someday I'll find the right guy.
    This is an amazing poem! I love it to bits! I love it especially because I can relate to it so much!