We talked all night
sometimes all day
I never slept much
cuz you kept me felling so high
I never thought we'd end up where we are
I thought id would never ever go this far
but we know how feelings change
we know this was meant to be
you were put here on earth just for me...
We live together now
along with my family...
yea yea i know
the insanity...
a one bedroom house
with five people and cats...
crazy you think?!
but thats how strong our love is...
You told me you want to buy me a ring
you want to marry me and have kids...
I said yes immediatly...
my heart
my world
my soul
my one
my only
my life
my love......
Author notes
i wrote this for my boyfriend...he is the only one for me and i dont know what i will do if i ever lose him....
i read "It was all a Dream"
Written May 17th, 2006
A contest entry
- the voice of a lover is the sound of sweet symphony. by Starlette.
375 points, ended June 1, 2006, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful
Wow im happy for you. its weird how we grow huh? i can remember us both rambling about girls and other stuff, its great to see how much we have learned from events. i wish you the best of luck with the engagement. this was a beautiful poem i hope one day to be able to say this about a man, i guess I have to wait my turn?
love
manda
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alrighty i'm back. and i still don't know where to start. i love very first stanza shtuff and i love the very end because it's such a sweet emphasis on how love for the right persn never fails to complete a battered heart. i really loved this a lot, and i can't explain how emotionally it just grabbed my heart and gave it a hug. thank you so much for your entry.
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wow
wow...
1. i'm really tired so i can't process my thoughts
2. i have a hundred good thoughts and praises to give you that even if i were fully awake i wouldn't know where to start
3. I know this feeling so, so well...
4. this made me cry
5. this is the first entry i've read so far that has made me feel like i'm not alone.
i'll be back tomorrow to give you more of my thoughts, but for now, please now that i am amazed. thank you.
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