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Teara's Mind

The sound of flesh ripping echoed through her ear. She had done it again, she would never stop. Victims screams and pleads only brought her to a higher state of harmony. The thick liquid that ran down her hands and the soft beats of it hitting the ground was but ecstasy to her morbid mind. So many familiar eyes once soaked with fear now are hallow and lifeless. Their bodies severed form their heads, were torn and beaten to an inhuman form. Not a spot around safe form the metallic liquid pouring for their open wounds. There she stood in the misted of it all with a sadistic gleam in her eyes and a twisted smirk playing on her tattered lips. But with in her mind a battle grow a battle with a little girl. The girl was weak and chained to prison like wall. But  still the girl tried to gain control back... i tried to gain control. Try as i may it could not be done i would never regain control. she had become me, slowly taking over my body and my mind. I'm fading away a little at a time. in a few years maybe months i will be gone..gone forever.....nothing to this world..no more.

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Written May 17th, 2006

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  • siegethedead03
    May 19, 2006
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