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You Make Me

Ain't able to say stop
Ain't able to say no
Your eyes make me
Something make me so

I lie to myself
But keep the truth
for everyone else
Please give me a shoot

When the shit is to much
I let it flow out with
my blood, without touch
You make me, do it all

Cant say it
Cant get it out
Cant scream
Cant shout

What have I done wrong
I promise I please you
I could sing a song
Make you comfortable

Just tell me
I will see

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Written May 17th, 2006

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