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Stained Glass

Stained Glass



Kisses that
Pain me so
The love that I'd see to the sun has no more
The sounds of giant rain
Washing over me
My labor, this love inside me
Done with a chamber with stained glass
Tear stained pillows
My love, a death certificate
Stars I defy you
Our constellation
Of pounding hearts
The world is in the breeze of a red sunset
Love of a morning
Mourning this love
Grief of the heart and lost
The sounds of dew
Silence of my tears
The Day of love
Gone to me
Of a hand of satin,
Your heart's a dozen-kissed rose
A whisper
Shot in a sacrament
Love before it’s own self were to die



Steven Mels

Author notes

i was inspired to write this . after watching romeo and juilet.
Written May 17th, 2006

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  • xsuicidaldemonx
    May 22, 2006
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    Touching

    It seemed romantic. Aswsome!


  • Theroseislovely
    May 20, 2006
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    Oh like a renaissance poem! Well done, well done, my applauds!!


  • Whispering Winds
    May 17, 2006
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    My dear friend,
    You done a wonderful job here..
    Thanks for sharing,
    Tammy


  • Erotik Rose silver member
    May 17, 2006
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    This was really good with a wonderful flow, thank you for sharing this.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 17, 2006
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    wow, you did a great and amzing job on this poem. you have a golden pen with this as always. you did a wonderful job, keep it flowing.


  • Goodolenad
    May 17, 2006
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    i just loved it! there is nothing more to say...simply wonderful...just like always!


  • Heartofacircle
    May 17, 2006
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    these are some deep words but is so well done, thanks for sharing and keep up the awesome poetry here your doing great uncle


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    May 17, 2006
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    Beautifully written!!!!! :F

    Steven:
    This is beautifully compsed and clearly understood, a sad message, thoug, and I just pray your grief is relieved and a ray of peace, sunshine and hope, come your way.....
    I love you So, and I miss my real Steven.....
    God bless you and guide you always,
    Love Mom


  • UnderTheWeepingMoon
    May 17, 2006
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    Ooooo this is Shakesperean...I loved it so much. Thanks for sharing it.

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