My souls a screamin
Brain is on fire
My story of life is broken and the middle of my book is missing
I'm sitting here wishing things were the way it used to be but now its like I'm annoyed for all eternity
I gotta get outta this life before I ponder on a death that's been locked up in a closet it would be the darkest deed I could do for life
I can hear all the whispers around me like I'm tripping over myself
Its hard to take back the things I have did
Now I'm cryin for the way I wish things could be instead its stabbing me in the BACK.
Author notes
Written May 17th, 2006
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truly a day of hell..........achingly to read..and feel
the depths of despair and pain in this poem!
excellent entry.....and yes..we felt your every pain...
and the stab of the back...was wonderful imagery!
well done!
well done!
flamesdragoness
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this is exactly what i'm feeling right now, i just fought with my friend..i feel like an idiot, maybe i'm the one at fault, i am so stupid ...thanks for this poem, i feel it now it helps me.
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very goooooooooooooooooooooood!! liked it a lot!
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wow this is very goood!!! i liked it a lot!!! peace and much love!!
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good
hey that is really good. I liked reading that. Well keep up the good work. -
3 Stars ***
We cant espace from what we have already done, desarae... but it is always better to try and solve the matter before it gets worse.... there are many times when we feel that we have done bad.. or we could have done better.. at this time.. its better to move on then stay where you are regretting for what we have done
...Desarae.. i hope things get well soon sweety
in case you need to talk about it.. i am always there to listen to you .. and to help you incase i can
take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up.. your humble little friend....
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... ... - vic ( who else? )
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