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A love brought down by fate

There once was a girl
she was young and alone
she spent her life locked in her room
the pain in her head was her only home
suffering in silence
drowning in cold blood
then along came the boy who could stop the flood..

He came and nurtured her.. he helped her grow
the lonely sad boy.. she never wanted to let him go

Their love developed fast, but they didnt know what to do
both delicate and vulnerable
they'd been through the same pain too
they'd been hurt and humilliated, left to die and rot.
they were perfect for each other.. which they never forgot

But Fate that evil thing
pushed them together then pulled them apart
It broke their hearts and slit their skin
then threw them all the way back to the start.
Fate played its evil game...over and over again..

now these twisted tortured souls...
are trapped just being friends

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Written May 17th, 2006

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  • metal wordsmith
    September 21, 2006
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    R+J new century

    straight from romeo and juliet, nicely done. really cool portrayl of the whole star crossed lovers theme. cool poem.


  • -Ink Artist-
    May 17, 2006
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    Very deep emotional piece! Great job!

    ~*Lori*~