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W(h)etted Desires (long)

W(h)etted Desires (long)

The luscious leather whispers down my back
A teasing tongue strokes softly on my skin
So deftly wielded from a Master's hand
i'm waiting, breathless ... let the fun begin.


Her wrists and ankles tied within a frame,
On stern command, she does as she is bid
Her bottom raises high, the crop aloft,
Knowing I won't treat her like a kid.


Opening up my precious treasure trove
To tempt the eyes which sense my every move
No secrets now, my inner self exposed
As crystal moisture fills my satin groove.


Her tethers tensed, but all to no avail.
Her smooth and glistening sweetness tempting Me.
The leather tongue falls softly with a slap
Thus leaving pink, enticing lines to see.


The air now sings the almost soundless swish
Of leather cutting air ... a silent noise
The riding crop descends to bite and sting
To take from me my self control and poise.


The sight and scent of her in her release
Betrayed by her insatiable desire
Her crystal dew and moans of deep content
Ignite in Me My passion's roaring fire.


i crave His throbbing manhood's deep possession
And, teetered on the brink of Kingdom Cum,
i arch into the tightly knotted tethers
And beckon His desires to succumb.


My eagerness inflames and leaves Me wanton
Her body calls Me on, all reason stolen.
Accepting in her portal of desire
My gift to her of blue steel heat so swollen.


We freely take and give to one another
And slake the fiery thirst of passion's need
Until in one completely shattering instant
He fills me with His lusty, scalding seed.


I'm breathless, falling limply on her breasts
Release her wrists to feel her sweet embrace.
The marks she bears will quickly fade away
But the love which marks My heart time won't erase.

Author notes

This is a collaboration between Master Domto-one and Master Domtos rose, written from a Dominant/submissive point of view. The italicised stanzas are my thoughts, the bold ones are Master's.

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Written May 17th, 2006

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  • HaileeDear
    February 26, 2008

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    This is SO pretty. i dont know if that sounds weird..but it was really beautiful. Your word choice made it flow together so well. thanks for entering.
    xoxo
    pixie


  • natchstucco
    February 16, 2008
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    Well this is a well written poem regarding the acts that are very intensive. there is no low going on and I play along with both rolls. bravo.


  • natchstucco
    February 9, 2008

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    Sounds like the words of experience. lol. heh heh. well you have done a fantastic job of #3 option. I should of never expected less. well done. dont reply or rate my comment. thanx.


  • Blooming Poet
    February 8, 2008
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    ths is one hell of a poem. It's so unique and so sensual. I love it. makes me fantazize. *naughty*


  • Kathryn Bowden
    February 8, 2008
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    great write, I've never read anything like it


  • Master Domtos rose
    June 21, 2006
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    Thank you


  • Cs282
    June 20, 2006
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    great poem

    Edited on Jun 21, 10:07 because 'had to chang it'.

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