You bring the blade back to life in my soul,
Slashing and slicing without any control,
Bleeding inside, tormented tears I cry,
As my slaughtered soul slowly dies,
I cant cut, I cant cry,
Sometimes I wanna die,
I think I am,
I think this is the end,
Where do you go when your life turns black,
Who do you lean on when no one comes back?
How can you smile when you have forgot how to laugh,
How can you live when your life go's off track!?
I'm drowning inside, in my own blood,
Of this twisted life I have had enough.
I cant go on no more and I cant win this fight,
That's why I choose to kill myself tonight...
To those I loved, I still do,
And whom love me, forgive what I do,
Love me for me, strong or weak,
Place me in my grave but please do not weep!
Author notes
Just a poem dont freak.. was feeling down and just let go.. not gonna kill myself! 
Written May 16th, 2006
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whoa...so sad...really deep...but so sad. I like the power of voice in this write. Awesome job...but so sad...okay ima stop sayin that now...Good Job...Luv ya dearie--Ann
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SADNESS
REALLY SAD POEM BUT BEATIFUL. I LOVE IT. NORMA""""""" -
this is an awesome write full to the brim with power and raw unhinged emotion, i love it! so dark and deep.
keep it up and keep on penning out these great writes.
night owl -
I read this on myspace and commented. This is a really good poem. I love you baby and I wish i could take away the pain you hold in your heart. Never stop being a fighter, I am here for you always!
love always,
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powerfull words on this piece
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powerful sadness in your poem. very great use of the words and the timing of them. it has a great flow to it. and a great read. I love how you ended the poem. everyword i read at the end was wanting make me cry. keep it up. good job
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Puts into words what alot of people are afraid to say.
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i am so very glad that you added the bit in your author comments to soothe a worried heart. this is well written. i would hate to see what you would write were you truly going to go through with this. i pray you never do write one of those. thank you for being trusting enough to share this side of you with me. hope2makeit
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