Dayz are longer now
I am feeling stronger now.
I have endured so much turmoil;
My temperature is at a low boil.
Each day I look at the sun;
I feel so much fun.
This makes my dayz bright;
Lifting my spirits to new heights.
Just taking one day at a time,
My dayz are beginning to rhyme.
God is with me...
Making me feel free as a bee!
He is always on my mind;
He is certainly one of a kind.
Author notes
This is where my mind is as I approch the lazy dayz of summer....
Written May 16th, 2006
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excellent~
Simple fun and carefree...
Loved this one sis
Hugs
Susan~~~
P s Makes me want to try to go out and fly like a bee
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Sweet but simple. There is no need to over do a thing when it can be said so simply and beautifully as this. Very creative and fun. I hope it was as much fun to write as it was to read. Thanks.
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Thx Titus for your nice comments on me as well as my poem....
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Much devotion to the ever helpful guy upstairs, a truly remarkable faith you have, nice work indeed!
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A very encouraging poem if I may so, giving strength to otherwise weaker poets, nice strength and finally feel it always hopefully, !
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I want thank all of you for commenting on my simple little poem . And especially Wolfdreamer for the collab on it.
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Summer has an tranquil, calming affect on the soul. I really love your lines:
"Just taking one day at a time,
My dayz are beginning to rhyme."
Everything falls into place and your world rhymes once again.
A beautiful, reflective poem of those warm summer thoughts.
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It's all about the "pers". Perspective, perception, personality, persuasion etc. You live on the bright side of all of them. Thanks for the nice poem and great message.
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uplifting
delicious..loved it Linda, you have been away for a while but what a great entrance..hope all is well with you.
God Bless
Babs
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Thx Wolfdreamer for the collab. You always seem to know how to complete my thoughts.
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terrific
Simply wonderful theme dear Red. I also loved your upbeat reflections of the coming spring and summer after a long hard winter. You are so very talented and your themes are always so inspiring you are a joy to work with. Terrific poem and a truly terrific lady. God Bless--
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Very peaceful and upllifting brings
a comfort with a feeling of hope.
Hugs,Sherry -
Leenabean thx for your comment. Yes they can be if we just stop and enjoy them.
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The lazy dayz of summer are fun though...even though they are lazy...but thats what summer is all about ... taking a break...good write...keep it up. ~Alleena~
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