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Hero

You’re champion of love
Of everyone’s regret
Of scars that just won’t fade
And things you can’t forget

You’re hero of world
That’s nothing more than dirt
Where happiness is luck
And courage mirrors hurt

You step into the open
Where lights illuminate
All can see you true
Condemned to loss and hate

But stand before the jury
Judged by each and all
Endure each lasting slash
And rise up from each fall

Author notes

.... a work in progress. i just kinda spilled it out and didnt do much editing and im gonna wanna add to it.... but this is waht i got for now. let me know if you have any suggestions for me! anywho, thanx for reading
Written May 16th, 2006

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  • Puppydog gold member
    May 17, 2006
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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM

    A true hero, rising up after they fall no matte how often they do.