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Call me Clown

Away from here
Away from now
Away from the people who call me clown

People change
They move on
But still they remember all the fun
They still call me clown

"A Lepard cant change their spots" They say
I know i'll prove them wrong one day

Walk accross the town and people stare
"Hey theres the clown" They would say

Words cut deep from a past you want to forget
You will never guess what?
They still call me clown

Walk across a bridge and just look down
If I jumped would they still call me clown?

If I die
Passers by
No longer say
"Hey theres the clown"
But cry.

I guess a lepard can change its spots
But if people dont look they dont see
There goes just another clown.

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Written May 16th, 2006

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  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 18, 2007

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    Wow such a powerfull piece..you are a great poet keep up the good work and Ill deffinately go and read some more of your poems Im sure they are going to be great as well


  • Dark Whispers
    April 16, 2007

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    this poem is truly sad and it shows how cruel people can be. this was an eccellent poem. thanks for entering.


  • Sam-I-Am
    May 17, 2006
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    Oh wow.... that's deep, really deep,

  • UniqueMoi
    May 16, 2006
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    Wow really powerful.


  • robnj silver member
    May 16, 2006
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    Nice word choice. Great analogies.

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