The world is coming to an end
Did i live righteously?
It started out great
Being a wonderful Catholic
Then the teen’s years started
Faced with peer pressures
Drinking?
Smoking?
Drugs?
Rebelling?
Did i give in too much?
How will my judgment day go?
Will hell be my home?
Will heaven?
Did i live righteously?
The world is coming to an end
WHAT WILL BECOME OF ME?
Author notes
Written May 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- Judgement Day by UnderTheFloorboards.
300 points, ended May 20, 2006, 7 entries
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How is rebellion "sinful," as it were?
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Wonderful job on this! So many questions that people feel only one person can answer... I think the real question is.. will you see the light if it is put in front of you? and secondly will you go to it? I dont think its gods choice where anyone goes really.. if he is the higher up man... then why did he leave so many humans to chose their own paths .. I doubt he did it for no reason... I believe he gave us the choice, not only to chose what we do but also to chose who we are.. think of this... would god really put us here to sin and disobey him.. just so he could sentence us to hell? I dont think so.. lol
great job!
Love,
KID ~*~
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