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Self redemption

Starting anew,
rebuilding relationships that have crumbled & fell.
So young, yet so in control.
She knows exactly what she needs,
& she wont turn away until she gains what she had lost.
exactly the binding of her autobiography.
this is her future, & she holds it in *her* hands.

Opinions only matter if they're true,
Thoughts becoming actions.
Holding her own.
No fear, No distrust within herself.
exactly her wrong,
& embracing her right.
Making a new path,
But not forgetting the old one.
The lessons learned will not be erased
This is her life,
& shes the one in lead.

Author notes

Uhhmm, my life finally seems stable. & im enjoying it.
Written May 16th, 2006

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  • x-TeenageDrama
    May 18, 2006
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    I didnt really liked where your poem went, it's got really good flow and everything but it seems really just like it was skimming the surface.
    I liked how you presented it though.
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    P.S. Thanks for the comment on my poems. <3