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sleeping

Words of hate consume me
Screams and cries of sadness in my eyes
Wondering if the answer will come to all my whys
Wishing that the truth will be revealed from the lies

Sometimes I just sit and think
If things will ever change
If I will ever find myself
Because I feel so strange

At the end of each day
As I drift away
Into my world of dreams
I know that tomorrow
Might be a better day
That’s what pushes me forward
or at least that’s what I say

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Written May 16th, 2006

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  • painfullywaiting
    March 3, 2007

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    "Sometimes I just sit and think
    If things will ever change
    If I will ever find myself
    Because I feel so strange"
    sometimes i feel just like this its as if you can read me...


  • ShadowEyes
    May 17, 2006
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    very good!

    This is very good! I love the way it puts feelings and thoughts into words! It flows very well and is better than my poems! lol. Love it!

    luv ya lotz!

    >crimson<


  • DistilledGin
    May 16, 2006
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    This is great gurl...there's aLOT of emotions in this piece. Like the TV used to say, 'dynamite comes in small packages' lol