In my head, out my head, a description of me
Look at psychiatrist examining me
Making good use of the things that they find
Things that the everyday folks leave behind
Schizoid they label me, magic and strange
I'm cooky or gooky, my head's rearranged
I don't talk in sentences but in metaphor
So puzzling is this, and what is it for?
I've got other people living inside my mind
Even I don't know why
But it's something I never asked
So...
Undergroud, Overground, Wombling free
My extra identites, inside of me
Watching the doc's make use of what they find
The things that the everyday folks leave behind
See my world enchanted with fairies and dreams
Magic and mystery, plots and schemes
Making my poetry and stories so fine
Something unique that makes them all mine
Art and magic, and out of my tiny mind
I'm very strange
But its something I never asked...
Author notes
Written May 16th, 2006
A contest entry
- i have a mental illness... by Viyanna Rosemarie.
300 points, ended May 22, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Excellent write my Darling
. This is well done, and one of the reasons why I am so attatched to you .. Best of luck to you in the Contest my Darling . 
Cheers
Kirk
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This is fantastic! It made me smile so much!
I can really relate to it too...lol...........you have done a great job of putting your poem into a song with humour and fun whilst also telling a story!
100/10!! Isn't it such a fun world of mystery us crazies live in hehe xxx -
Making my poetry and stories so fine
Something unique that makes them all mine
Art and magic, and out of my tiny mind
isn't this so fun sometimes and i agree--strange is not the word. fun, unique, gifted, awesome, and you are the words that came to mind for me. thank you for this wonderful entry into the contest and i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie -
well i dont think the word is strange, its more like different and I dont see a thing wrong with that, you did well with this write, thanks for sharing and keep up the awesome poetry, best of luck in this contest.......
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