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tunneling

my world deranged,
myself contained
with words yet not spoken.

with every tear,
for all these years
my heart remains unbroken.

my mind confused,
my visions a blur
for we remained in focus.

a light up ahead,
please not to be dimmed
not to be consumed by locus.

i'll give it a try,
my feelings, my heart by whim
to not lose sight of you.

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Written May 16th, 2006

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