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Nox

Chivalrous child, move slowly now!
He speaks softly, heeding wisely,
Blushing pale, and hiding all,
Skin puckered from bitter words,
cheeks leathered with tears
dried a thousand times over,
though the silver stain remains.

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pretty simple to get... especially if you know latin...
Written May 15th, 2006

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  • Rei
    May 18, 2006
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    I love your imagery ><. You have always have a unique feeling to it...