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In the Dim Graveyard Tonight

 




  Twigs and vines, skulls and spines
   rats and snakes, what is this place-
    a graveyard laid, men decayed
     abandoned to the night's delight
      no one 'round, not a sound
     until the gong of first twilight
    through the night dancing light
   their souls within the mist unbound
  carnal thoughts torment minds
 desiring what they cannot find-

  Into the town searching 'round
   until a maiden fair is found
    tied and bound not a sound
     drag her limp and paralyzed
    such a feast they'll have tonight
   feeding on unearthly fright
  screech and howl feast and fight
  in the dim graveyard tonight.

 







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Come on, Halloween, hurry up!
Written May 15th, 2006

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  • AngelOfBetrayal
    July 15, 2006
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    That is so cool, it is so friggin spooky it makes me want to smile, lol, i loved it, you are a good well rounded poet, were i am just a dork poet, but oh well, your cool

  • Daydream Believer
    June 14, 2006
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    Brilliant! I like it alot Keep it up!


  • Toni A Christman
    May 16, 2006
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    Well that's just spooky as all get out. I'm getting into the habit of picking up your new work - and it's turning out to be a great habit. You always have something to think about in your poems. Great write - I really loved it. Best, Toni


  • Madd Hatter
    May 15, 2006
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    groovy

    omg! thats awesome! it just sucks that im all out of applauses, i really like it! it has a nice beat to it, and i love the rhymes! great job!