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judgement

Who are we in a world so cold
Who are we in a world so judgemental

*We are the ice that freezes time
We are simply unable to remember
Change doesn't ever come easily
So here we are-just another number*

Who are we in a world so cold
Who are we in a world so judgmental

*We are the ones
Who could make the difference
The changes all depend on us
But we rarely ever make it our mission*

Who are we in a world so cold
Who are we in a world so judgmental

*We are the stereotypes-and the labels
But we bring them on ourselves
while they are judging us
we are judging everyone else*

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Written May 15th, 2006

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  • lindaburns gold member
    November 24, 2007
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    Who are we indeed? Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Tarja
    May 17, 2006
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    As usual you have captued something amazing here. The first line actually took me back to a Mudvayne song called World So Cold.
    This was fantastic babe. Keep it up!
    amanda

  • Tink89
    May 16, 2006
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    This was very well written!! i felt the words i felt the whole poem!! definetly got my attention and kept it! nice work!