“Hello again,” I say quietly, peering intently at the creature that is sitting in front of me, “and how’ve you been? I’ve been good, thanks for asking. It must get pretty boring in that little bowl; do you want me to let you out? No? Ah well, I suppose it’s for the best. You can’t breathe in the air can you? No, I didn’t think so. Shame. I would’ve liked to show you some of the stuff around here. The woods at the end of my road, with all the bluebells that sit like a blanket over the floor. The abbey at St. Albans with its huge rose window. The sunset off Veralamium park. I could take your bowl, I suppose, but knowing me, Id probably drop it or something, or spill the water out, and that’s no good. Hmmmm. I could always take some pictures, and then show them to you when I get back, but pictures probably aren’t right. It’s better to see them in person, or, in, whatever. Hmmm, do you even understand what I’m saying? Probably not, ah well, it’s still nice talking to you. My mummy says that I need to go to bed now because I have school tomorrow, and we have a maths test. Have a good night sleep. Ill see you tomorrow. ‘Night fish.”
Author notes
Hmmm, I guess its sorta written from the point of view of a young kid..... iono why I didnt write it from my PoV, it just came out like that (probably summat to do with my mentality at the moment. Ah well.
And in case you hadnt guessed, its option 10 
Written May 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options for STORIES by Jinxgirl.
500 points, ended May 18, 2006, 7 entries
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Very fun... and kinda cute. Me likes. -
he he, thanks, and I still talk to my cat actually....
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Enjoyable and fun
I would do this, I talk to dogs and kittens. I don't think its strange at all, infact, I think it helped me in my charisma to animal skills. Enjoyable, honestly. Fun, definatly. Loved it, yeah! -
actually, I guess it may be a _little_ like me, in one of my wierd moods ¬.¬
heh, thanks anyway
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lol very interesting, sounds like something a kid would do... or even me, and I'm not exactly a kid lol. I like this, it's a very fun piece. good luck and thanks for entering!
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