Seductively teasing your body,
Enticing nerves, fire blazing. Not
Xeric, I slowly slide,
Undulating your thrusting hips.
Anticipation, quivering as I
Lower myself deeper,
Taking each inch of
Hardness. Moaning,
Ivory pleasures seep as your
Name I call. Yes, cum now, and
Give into your lustful desires.
Author notes
Titled per Poison
Written May 15th, 2006
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Damn, now that I would love to have seen, lol. I'll pay for the dry cleaning hun, how's that? Wouldn't want you to be walking around with big wet spots on your pants now would we?
Thanks for the comments.
Storm -
Now I know to never drink while reading your works, Storm. My soda just dripped to my lap as I was reading. My freaking mouth hung open like a gored fish. Very sensual to say the least.
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Thanks hun. I suppose that would depend on who is sitting next to you.
Storm -
Thanks Val. Just my mind running a bit wild. lol
Storm -
Xeric mean deficient in moisture, which I am NOT,
Thanks for reading
Storm -
ooooooooooooooooooh my goodness dear fantastical. hummm i wonder if the guy next to me would mind if i jump him and have my wicked way with his body?
loved it dear
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Ahhhh! see, I got so caught up in the substance, I forgot to pay attention to the form! (I was wondering who Xeric was, and why you ended the line before it with "not"!) Thank you for enlightening me once again! You continue to amaze young miss! john
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Oh my, another sizzling flow from your virtual pen. Very descriptive. Jeez, reading all your sexy poems lately has made me wake up a few parts of me.
~Val -
John,
First reply, though I like what you wrote as your instead, it's an acrostic and that would kind of change the meaning.
Now onto your write up there. Very nice. I like. Thank you, glad to have inspired the piece.
Your comments are much appreciated.
Storm -
Thank you Jeannie
Storm -
How about this mistress? see what you have spawned?! Enjoy! john
Hands to breasts, sweat
sinewing down onto my arm.
Feeling you on me, around me,
deeper ,then soft,
almost escaping, drawing my breath
from my soul
We rock, as waves
pulse between us,
pulling our heartstrings --
Taut --
I am you, you are me
We are one
as again, my hands climb.
What do you think?
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Mistress Storm! Very provocative! I might not have succumbed to adding the cum--instead, revelling in the throes, expounding the lustful desires--though I do feel "moved" by your "piece!" thank you for making my night a little less boring! keep it "UP!" john
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Well written. Great job. So sensual and seductive. Very enjoyable read.
Jeannie D
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thats where the difference comes in, sensual or pure sexual... me I prefer this, sensual and subtle, this is good hon!
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Ok, so it's a bit more of the desires. Yes just a bit. If I wrote them all down, full detail, they would have to charge as a porno site here.
Thanks for the comments
Storm -
very sensual and hot storm, oh a nice little write this!
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