Shattered glass
Marks the spot
Where your reflection stood
Can you see it?
Chorus
Eyes wide open
Staring through me
Vision broken
Light difracting
Clouded eyes
Crystalline clear
Another sleepless night
Does it matter?
Chorus
Eyes wide open
Staring through me
Vision broken
Light difracting
Close your mind
And open your eyes
Unlock your sight
Can you see me?
Chorus
Eyes wide open
Staring through me
Vision broken
Light difracting
Eyes wide open
Staring through me
Vision broken
Sight reflecting
Author notes
Another boredom-induced product of my mind
Try not to get to weirded out
Written May 15th, 2006
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well aint you just kick @ss poet! lol. This is great i see it as like a balad of some sort idk rock balad w/e you's into. GOod job!
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Dude Went through all your poems crazy badass.
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BEEP
I Got The Tune. o O; I Don\'t Know Im Probably Wrong. I Remeber This From Your Notebook.
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yea.. i think i'd like to hear the music this goes with.. or just.. the whole thing period. sounds interesting. keep on writing...
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I agree with the others.Great job, Ros
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Roaring applauses and standing ovations!!!
Oh this was absolutely wonderful! I truly enjoyed this...I do not know what it personally meant to you but this is what it meant to me...he sees me without noticing..it cuts my heart and torments my soul. Does he even care? Doubtful. I see myself among the mirrors..yearning for someone who will not have me...and he breaks these mirrors everytime he stares as though I were not there.
Brilliantly done!
Bites.
Blue~ (lady Atusha) -
haha no hun i love it. I was gonna write a poem smilar to this but it kinda flopped but hey you got it good hehe. Loved it babe
great job
Love,
Punky
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