Tongue slides, your
Heat rising. Tender lips
Envelop your masculinity. Soft
Whimpers escape with
Each flick of passion,
Teasing and taunting your every
Desire. Your body
Relinquishing all control, I slowly
Ease inches deeper. Your
Aching grows stronger, each
Movement taking you higher as you
Scream out in the midst of the wet dreams
Author notes
Titled (with the addition of the s ) per Lords of Acid
Written May 15th, 2006
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No no, not wrong hun, fun! Glad you enjoyed. And thank you.
Let's say it was an inspired piece.
Storm -
Holy uh, shoot! Storm this is so wrong. This was too vivid and now I got me blood racing. Your fault. To tantalizing! You're killing me, Storm!
Excellent work. 
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So did I Val, so did I. Thanks for reading
Storm -
Heh, I could have a few of my own (of the title) just from reading this. Hot hot hot! Nice image you've mastered. Great work.
~Val -
Thank you, appreciate it.
Storm -
Awsome. HOT!
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Well as tantalizing as the thought may be, a 15 year old sex therapist? I am not sure what laws you guys have over there, but I am not ready to go prison. Thanks for the comments though. Nice to know it had that effect.
Storm -
how would u like 2 have a threesome poem is very sexy reply soon i am horny from reading
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bit?
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Thank you my friend. Just a bit of desire.
Storm -
You have grasped the epitime of sensuality in this poem.
Absolutely love it!
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