Twilight once again and no more time
sun coming and moon goes
stars are sleeping and no one knows
how much i cared for you today
Gone, another day in a night
and with it my joy
i feel your arms around me no longer
and the suns burning grace may kill
But ill remember our twilight
a day inside a night
and think about our stars as we made them
while a new twilight comes for another
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Written May 14th, 2006
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thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem with me. this is well written and very heartfelt. i am looking forward to reading more from you. viyanna rosemarie
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Awesome poem i must say so myself. I love how you compared your love to nature. Whether that feeling of love be a good feeling or a bad feeling,the nature just made it sound beautiful anyways. it's awesome how you put "stars are sleeping and no one knows how much i cared for you today." that line set my heart on fire for some reason. it was a very powerful line. A true artist can grab another poets soul. And that's just what you have done. x-cellent poem. I'm happy you shared it.
.AutumN.
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