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And so open your mind unto this thought;
Our beliefs have boundaries unbreakable.
Freedom thwarted by incomprehensible eternity.
So you take a step, a leap, a chance.
But ne'er wish for satisfaction.
You've already had this dance.


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Stop and think for a moment. Try to honestly imagine what Nothing actually is.  Try to understand what infinity really is.  We're built only to understand certain things, things with an end.  Therefore, the path we travel down in life is relatively narrow, and no matter what we come across in life, we've already dealt with it.  If you don't understand, just think about it, really really hard.  If it hurts...you're getting there
Written May 14th, 2006

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  • Your Messiah
    May 14, 2006
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    Shakespeare helps |Nods|

    You've explained it, told me to think about it and gave me a headache just like you gave yourself one. Thanks a lot, stinkypants.

    This is lovely. Whether you like it or not, you're a wonderful writer. You use words so beautifully.