Push me baby, harder, as I
Ride your waves of passion.
Intoxicate me with your lust,
My desires burning strong
And steady. Your
Loving takes me to the edge.
Seduce me, baby, take me to
Climactic heights. Your surges
Rippling through my core,
Electrifying every nerve. The
Apex rises with each new thrust.
Meshing together, an unbridled passion, the
Sounds of primal screams pierce the air.
Author notes
Titled as per Motley Crue
Written May 14th, 2006
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Thanks for the comments, appreciated.
Storm -
very good
very well done so well put. I really do not what to say it very good work. Thanks for your comments hope you have a great day -
Thank you kindly.
Storm -
GREAT!!
YOU REALLY KNOW HOW IT'S DONE!!
NICE!! -
Thanks Wee, much appreciated
Storm -
Thank you Anne. Appreciate your comments hun.
Storm -
sooooooooo good! love it as always dear
~Siren -
ooooh raw!!!! and grawlllllll
hmm lady, a excellent job on heating up the place
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Thank you Val. Had to get some steam rolling,
Appreciate your commenting.
Storm -
Thank you Angel, appreciate your comments
Storm -
Oh me oh my! This was just, uh, hot. And another song title, I see. I suppose it helps allviate writer's block, eh? Very enticing. Nice work sis.
~Val -
Sexy as heck!
You go, wow...you go!
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Payback???
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Damn and holy cow dung. Primal screams is right! Uh, have I said this was good? Damn, Storm. Payback for the ones I entered in your cotnest? lol Damn.
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