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Primal Screams

Push me baby, harder, as I
Ride your waves of passion.
Intoxicate me with your lust,
My desires burning strong
And steady.  Your
Loving takes me to the edge.

Seduce me, baby, take me to
Climactic heights.  Your surges
Rippling through my core,
Electrifying every nerve. The
Apex rises with each new thrust.
Meshing together, an unbridled passion, the
Sounds of primal screams pierce the air.

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Titled as per Motley Crue
Written May 14th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 22, 2006
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    Thanks for the comments, appreciated.

    Storm

  • earthstar
    September 22, 2006
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    very good

    very well done so well put. I really do not what to say it very good work. Thanks for your comments hope you have a great day

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 24, 2006
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    Thank you kindly.

    Storm

  • May 24, 2006
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    GREAT!!

    YOU REALLY KNOW HOW IT'S DONE!!
    NICE!!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 15, 2006
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    Thanks Wee, much appreciated

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 15, 2006
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    Thank you Anne. Appreciate your comments hun.

    Storm

  • Wee Mira
    May 15, 2006
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    sooooooooo good! love it as always dear

    ~Siren

  • dutch2lips
    May 14, 2006
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    ooooh raw!!!! and grawlllllll hmm lady, a excellent job on heating up the place
    thank you!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 14, 2006
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    Thank you Val. Had to get some steam rolling, Appreciate your commenting.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 14, 2006
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    Thank you Angel, appreciate your comments

    Storm

  • Night Valkyrie
    May 14, 2006
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    Oh me oh my! This was just, uh, hot. And another song title, I see. I suppose it helps allviate writer's block, eh? Very enticing. Nice work sis.

    ~Val

  • Heavenly Angel
    May 14, 2006
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    Sexy as heck! You go, wow...you go!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 14, 2006
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    Payback???

  • KnightRhymer
    May 14, 2006
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    Damn and holy cow dung. Primal screams is right! Uh, have I said this was good? Damn, Storm. Payback for the ones I entered in your cotnest? lol Damn.
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