i beg for
your love
i am
lifeless
without
your touch
share my dreams
end my
loneliness
my life and
soul
long to be
yours
eternally
Author notes
Written May 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- Love Love Love by Beautiful Dizaster.
300 points, ended May 15, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me emotions by BonaFidePoet.
600 points, ended December 3, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awww, I really like this one. The line spacing works extemely well. The overall concept is very sweet. Great job.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment. I loved entering the contest. Thank you for having it!! Warm Regards...vivela
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Great job... I really liked this poem... it was heart felt... good luck -
Thank you very much for your kind comment. It is very encouraging to read your words...Warm Regards...vivela
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You have packed this short piece jam full of love and emotion. I was taken with it....Nicely done and I will hopefully get a chance to read more of your work...Trina.
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