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A heartful journey

That day was a fateful one
I remember it well
The day I obtained the key blade
The day my nightmare began

That was the day
I lost my best friends and my home
The day the world
Fell into darkness

I travelled around
I saw many different worlds
I sealed the keyholes
Prevented the heartless getting through

I met so many new friends
And many new enemies
But there was no sign of anyone
Riku, Kairi, or the king

However we carried on
Searching for them
Until we found Riku submerged in the darkness
And Kairi trapped alongside the princesses

Then the one fateful day
We ran into the one who caused all this
Ansem.... The one who submerged Riku
Trapped Kairi, and took away our home

We fought him and beat him
We sealed Kingdom hearts
Alongside Riku and King Mikey
We stopped the darkness

One other thing
I learned along the way
All you need is a strong heart
And the will to keep it in the light

My heart is my own
And your heart is your own
Keep it in the light for me
Never succumb to darkness....

Author notes

This is another character centric, from Sora's point of view in Kingdon hearts. His view on the journey he took on in Kingdom hearts and maybe what he learned from the journey. Hope you like it, as this is the first kingdom hearts poem I have done. Tell me what you think of it
Written May 14th, 2006

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  • 1-Winged-Angel
    May 17, 2006
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    Thanks . I'm glad you liked the poem even though you don't like the game. Makes me feel even more special . Thanks for commenting and applauding. I really appreciate it


  • CloudxAeris
    May 16, 2006
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    Awesome poem, even though I personally hate Kingdomhearts. It explains pretty much what it is all about and all.... Goodjob and goodluck in the contest, as well as the future!!!!!


  • 1-Winged-Angel
    May 15, 2006
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    I knew that was my last verse all along, it was working around it that was the hard part. I'm glad you liked it . Thanks for commenting

  • Eternally Glass
    May 15, 2006
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    *claps* well done, you've done an excellent job of portraying the inner Sora. I especially like the last part.

    'My heart is my own
    And your heart is your own
    Keep it in the light for me
    Never succumb to darkness....'

    That was a nice way to bring it all together.


  • 1-Winged-Angel
    May 15, 2006
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    lol I'm glad you like it. You never know, I may post one about the second one up soon. I have already played the second one and finished the game, and I must say it rocks!!!!!!!! But I wont spoil it for you . Anyway, thans for applauding and thanks for commenting . I really appreciate it, and if you post a Kingdom hearts poem, let me know and I'll read it


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 14, 2006
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    I LOVE KINGDOM HEART, THAT IS THE GAME FOR ME, I WAS GOING TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS ONLY I WAS GOING TO USE THE SECOND ON , CAUSE I JUST STARTED PLAYING IT, KINGDOM HEART COMBAINE ALL OF WHAT I LOVE ABOUT RPGS, YOU DID A GREAT JOB, AND I AM USING CAP LOCK CAUSE I AM SO HAPPY, ONE OF MY FAVORITE RPG WRITERS DID A POEM ON MY FAVORITE GAME OF ALL TIMES, KEEP IT FLOWING AND GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST

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