Hold me, for but one moment, and
Everything will be just fine. You
Reach within the depths of my soul, it's
Only a matter of time. It is the strength you
Offer, that guides me through the night. And
Fill me with all your love
That keeps my goals in sight. With renewed
Hope and understanding, I will carry on.
Each moment, a memory, that seals a sacred bond.
Disguised by your mask, you'll see me on my way.
As the darkness comes to close,
You are my hero of the day.
Author notes
Titled as per Metallica
Written May 14th, 2006
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I understand that fully. That is what poetry is about is what you like and want. I just found it slightly difficult reading because of the quick stops.
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Thank you for the comments. Unfortunately that is how I write most of my acrostics, the freedom to not have to be within given lines. Appreciate your comments just the same
Storm -
I like this poem, but I think it would be better as that, not an acrostic. As an acrostic it was chopped up in midsentence that makes it so that it doesn't quite flow right. It is still a nice write.
Good luck,
Laney -
Thank you Val. But they aren't as hidden as you think. Ok, maybe some underlying tones of keep you guessing words. But just put it with so many of my other writes, and it stands out like a neon sign.
Hugs,
Storm -
Interesting. Written well, but I'm not sure what to make of it. Though I do see your off on your song acrostics. Okay, I'll have to read this one again and see if I can figure out your hidden meanings. That shall be my challenge for the day. LOL
~Val
Edited on May 14, 10:36 because ''.
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