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Confused

my knees start to shake
when you're in sight
my mind is filled with wonder
my heart with fright

when will this feeling stop?
when did it start?
how can i listen to my mind
without breaking my heart?

i am so confused
what should i do?
i cant think of anything
except you

should i ignore you
or just give it time?
i cant think straight
my heart controls my mind.

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Written May 13th, 2006

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  • Poetic Obscenity
    June 29, 2007
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    That's really pretty and very relateable<33
    It flowed well and I love the way you have with words
    <333
    Check out some of mine ^_^


  • Aims
    April 6, 2007
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    wow!!

    i can relate sooo much to what u r sayin` .. good write


  • xRebelxAngelx
    February 27, 2007
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    nice work...! xD

  • Bananer
    May 29, 2006
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    omg thats an awesome poem!


  • A Lonely Akumu
    May 18, 2006
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    Emotion

    Damn straught the heart does control the mind. This was beautiful like the rest of your poems! I'll be checking up on your poems to see if you've written anymore in a few weeks or days w/e ^^; I loved this poem!

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