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I Am Moving Away / Acrostic

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I am Moving away

I am moving away to live in another state.

Always traveling back and forth is hard
Makes it easier if we’re living together.

Making the decision to move can be hard
Once it’s made take the chance-don’t balk.
Visions of life with my love helps me choose,
I will begin a new life do the best that I can.
No one knows what’s in the future-it’s true.

Anyway I have nothing to hold me here
Will miss friends I have made and my Dad
And they can come visit me for a holiday.
Yes, I am happy to be with the man that I love.

Author notes

My Fiancee and I agreed it would be best if we were together instead of living so far apart and traveling back and forth is too hard, so I found a job there and I move next Wednesday to Geelong in Victoria.
Once I get settled in I will be back on AP again, I'm only moving States, not AP- I love it here too much to leave.
Written May 13th, 2006

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  • abdulrahman
    June 17, 2006
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    absolutely fabulous

    nice peom, change make perfect setign right
    i am always proud of the way u set thing , arang make
    thing unique in ur writing
    kepp it up friend


  • eternalpoet
    June 10, 2006
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    3 Stars ***

    ... .. dare you leave AP ... i will be sad and i will cry if you leave AP

    *runs to you and huggles you tight*

    Me's happyidy wappy that you are with him finally ....what about our drive in date?? ... .. dont forget me.. otay??

    You never told me that you got engaged, or i guess you very busy moving that time.. its alright though..

    Best of luck for the future Jennifer ... I hope and wish that your life be full of happiness and pleasure with him

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up... your humble little friend... ... ... ... - vic ( who else? )


  • jenelda silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    No Jan, way down South, but I'll still be here on AP

    Love Jen.


  • Janice M Pickett
    May 18, 2006
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    Awwww I was hoping you were moving to Qld so I could see you. BAWwWW!.
    Have fun in Geelong.

    Jan

  • Poet7376
    May 15, 2006
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    my dear jenn....success in love to you and yours.....not to be away long...ok....wish the best for you jenn...let nothing stand in the way of the love shared by the two of you...brian.... ... ... ...


  • Yemassee gold member
    May 14, 2006
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    First congratulations on the engagement thingie. Second, good luck with the moving and the living together thing. Been there...but I'm sure yours will me with far more luck than my last attempt, lol.

    It's a fresh start sort of isn't it? Kind of exciting huh. I wish you the best.
    Edited on May 14, 6:30 because 'my typing sucks'.

  • jenelda silver member
    May 14, 2006
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    Dear Hugh, How could I forget you my friend, we've only just begun to know each other, I'm only moving, not leaving AP.

    Love Jen
    Edited on May 14, 6:03 because ''.


  • hugh wyles silver member
    May 14, 2006
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    Dear Jen,
    ~~~
    GOOD LUCK!

    G od Bless you and Good Luck;
    O nly those with pluck
    O vercome ill-fate.
    D on't wait or hesitate.

    L et true love rule the day.
    U nderstand that, come what may,
    C ourage is the key.
    K indly remember me.

    Applause for your decision, your move and your pluck.
    Lovfe and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • Hinemoa silver member
    May 13, 2006
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    Dear Jen, As I said in your other poem, it's hard at first, but if you love each other it will work out, I'm happy I made the move and Heath and I are very happy.
    All the best with your move.
    Love Sally

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