Slice deep inside my tender flesh
To bring an end to all this pain is what I truely wish
Don't try to stop me it's too late
I've been broken way too long and this is my fate
Noone cares for me I don't even care about my own self
Don't want to live in this cruel world anymore,facing it without anyone else
I just want to compleatly give up
Life is not worth living after it becomes so corrupt
My life is pretty much meaningless to me now
Do not try to fix me, there's no way you'll ever be able to help me any how
I believe my death will bring me my only true happiness
my feelings will be no more, I'll be numb and lifeless
Looking at the world with my dieing eyes
No one would care and no one would cry
They'd go on with all their happy lives
Forget about me and how I ended my own life
They'd never give me a second thought I'd just be thrown into the back of their mind
All my memories no longer left behind
I don't believe you can miss that in which you did not care for
When I'm gone would you miss me or would you be one of the ones that didn't even think about me anymore
Would you think about me and the short amount of time we shared
Would I cross your mind even though you never cared
None of this was any of your fault
All my emotions and pain from now and the past just all built up
My life has just become so choatic as of late
My heart has turned cold and for me I have grown a strong hate
I'll look at this world with a void in my eyes as crimson runs down my arm puddling on the floor
I'll take my last final breath and feel satisfied for all my pain, sorrow, hate, and shame will be no more.
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Written May 13th, 2006
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I can feel the emotion in this piece...I've been there I know exactlly what you mean, but it is a great right...and I'm sure things will get better in the end.
Eternally a friend,
Josh -
Ah, but what if this is not it and there is another life beyond this that is even worse, or will appear that way because we have not learned the lessons of this previous existance. I think you better stick this one out just in case...
Besides life is much like the weather and changes from day
to day, you might find you actual like it a year from now
when the present things that bother you are no longer there.
-Eddy
Failure can only occur when we quit trying, for as long as we are trying there is always hope things will change. -
Nice work
Quite a nice little dark piece of poetry you have written here. I have to say the cutting of flesh is quite a delicate subject matter to write about but you penned this piece quite well. nice work and all round!
Paul 
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great peice, very well written and expressive with some strong feelings and expressions throughout and a good flow
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