i used to think about you
you drew circles in my mind
but then you ran ahead
and you left me behind
you went and made your new friends
and then i was turned away
i love you and i always will
is something i've always wanted to say
i know you never realized
the feelings i had for you
you'll never know the pain i felt
when you said that you loved her too
i was left out in the shadows
and my life just wasn't fair
when i was left on the floor
crying with no one there to care
Author notes
Written May 13th, 2006
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That is amazing. I hope you feel better now. Lost love is the most horrible thing in the world.
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u`ve a talent
u r sooo good at expressing ur feelings ...i almost cried reading this poem
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this piece has a lot of feeling...that i can't explain how it makes me feel except that i've been through that.
great job!
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Breath Taking
...You've looked right into my mind and took a nose dive into my heart! That was freaky! I loved this poem more than any poem I've ever read! I wish I had wrote this it was so good! Holy...it's like whoa...Im probebly sounding stupid so anywho ^^; This was beautiful, Fantastic, And all and all a more than perfect poem! Damn this was awesome! I'm really sorry you were left behind, but someday he'll be the one alone. What goes around comes around. *nods* You've got alot of emotion and promise. I'll have to look at more of your poems soon!
~*Your Friend Tora*~
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