One smile - All it takes for you to turn me
To tear apart the veil between worlds
To tear open my soul and drown me,
Bury me in emotions of love for you
One smile and I’m again forever yours
One touch – My heart skips a beat, rapture
A touch that makes my body shudder
A touch that makes my hands tremble
Take my hand in yours, darling, hold tight
One touch, one eternity, forever ours
One kiss – Our lips locked in this perfection
A kiss that’d wake up the dead, you’re mine
A kiss that shakes my very being completely
Passion peaks, lips part, our souls combine
One kiss, it’s been completed, we’re one
One smile – And all I ever knew crumbled
You stole me into you, forever trapped
You took it all and gave life back to me
Breathe life into me again, my angel
One smile, my legs give after, little nymph
Author notes
So yeah, I finally got around to type the "complete" version into here. I know I could simply have edited the old one, but I wanted to re-post it and keep the old one for now. It isn't perfect, I know that (and neither am I), but it's as good as it gets for now.
Doesn't matter if you like it or not, this is how it looks. ^^
Written May 13th, 2006
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Aw. . .this poem makes me sad with yearning! A kiss that can wake up the dead. .that sounds absolutely blissful. . .this poem made me feel all love-full. . .and I'm not much of a romantic at all!
that means, by the way, that this poem is damn good!
enjoy the holidays!
anansi
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Incredible
I have to say the last stanza was my favorite part, just made my heart burst into stars.. I loved it aww it was in credible.. -
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Thank you.
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awww >,>;
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Indeed.... =)
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New lesson for me... Never leave my friends at the computer when I'm not there, they deleted all the comments on this piece. Sorry about that. -,-;;
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