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The Whore

I laugh when you ask
Could there be any trust
Between us
Does your girl now
Have any faith?
While you sit on my couch
And grab on my waist?
You're talking like we have
Some kind of future
So now I have to ask
Would you do me
Like you do her?

I dont need to be doing this
Probably shouldn't go through with this
Guess I could lie
And tell you Im new at this
But I've seen it before
Does that make me a whore?
I just dont want to be that girl--
Home and lonely anymore

Yeah I did that too
Foolish, I thought I knew
Clueless I stayed true
I bought all the lies
God I wasted so much time.
The boy had me dumb, stuck,
and all types of messed up.
And now.. I just dont give a f***

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Written May 13th, 2006

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  • Aphasia
    May 15, 2006
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    Thanks, I actually wrote it on an airplane and I was terrified! I hate flying. So I think it came out a little more emotional than I felt about the situation but I guess it worked out. I read a few of yours, they're great!


  • ckwriter69
    May 13, 2006
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    GREAT!!!!

    Very strong poem you have written.I like the rythum and flow of it. I like the raw emotional statements you have created about this lover, and your guestions of faithfullness. I enjoyed the strong ending of disappointment. Keep up the great poetry and thanks for sharing it.