My heart skips a beat whenever you speak,
My souls been set free,
As I see imagine you getting down on one knee.
[x]Your
amazing
to
me[x]
I've never let you know how I truly feel,
Because I've always been afraid of this,
Cause you make me feel crazy,
And sometimes my visions become a little hazy.
[x]You
make
those
butterflies
flutter[x]
I know that you mean a lot to me,
That your no ordinary guy,
Your something special,
And something that I couldn't ever replace.
[x]Your
perfect
in
my
eyes[x]
I can't help but to care about you,
Your one in a million,
I am lucky to have you,
I hope we're never through,
And I hope you want me too.
[x]You
amaze
me
with
the
things
that
you
do[x]
And I just wanted you to know that I truly do
♥
L
O
V
E
♥
You.
Author notes
Written May 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- la la la love! by j-ay rose.
535 points, ended March 8, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Final Grading: 7/40
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Good portrayal of this mans importance. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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This is sooooooo sweet Lexi!!!!!!! I love that you formed the words between the [x] things so that it is one word each line!!!!!!! The form of the poem was great and I love it a lot!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!!
xoxo
meg
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Oh what a sweet and tender poem. So well written. Great job. Just amazing. I wish you and your love all the happiness in the world. Thank you for sharing.
Jeannie D
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awwww! such a sweet and romantic write!... its so nice that someone inspires you like this! (now i know what kinda guy to look for! heheh!)... oh just one tiny error you are is written as you're... other than that its a very cute poem!... the BG really adds to the magical effect!... good job!...
may you and your special someone,
for eternity and lives yet to come,
live and love by eachothers side,
and may your hearts beat as one..!
cheers!
Sue!
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