Feet floating on heaven’s clouds;
Two hearts entwining into one
As two lovers dance to life’s song
Author notes
Comments are very much appreciated. I looked at this piece and this is what came about. 
Written May 12th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #2 by Vickie J.
300 points, ended May 13, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Was browsing around and saw this one and thought, Hey, never read this one. Great poem, short and sweet, loved it like everybody else.
*God Bless*
Sarah -
your words brings life to the picture Great Job....I've enjoyed your readings....
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Hello Tim,
It seems pictures and words 100 percent suite you
this was another delight to stop by and read,
Now I will have to go see if this won
warm thoughts
FrozenTearz -
Wow! Thank you for the very unexpected compliment on my poetry. I really appreciate it
I'm glad you liked it!
--Tim -
Wow!! I'm amazed!.. So much said in those words you used! It was a beautifully written piece.. Amazing, I loved it! Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!
♥
Edited on May 16, 8:40 because 'dumbness =/'. -
Thank you, John Now that the contest is over I don't think I'll change it, but I appreciate your comment. I think this is the first one you've ever left me!
--Tim -
Exceptional write! I really liked your interpreation of this picture! Clearly this should have been a winner...it is in my book! Noble1
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Tim, I think you did a very nice job with expressing what the image “said to you.” The only thing I would recommend is to remove “two” from the third line. With only three lines being used, it feels too repetitious having it in the one just before it. Plus, it would compliment it with a count of 7-8-7. Just a thought.
~ John
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very nice, short and sweet
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Exquisite from beginning to end, Tim. Great interpretation~vj
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Tim-
I absolutely love it!It is so romantic and sweet.you did such a good job!Keep up the good work!!
God Bless,
Kara -
Oh TIm, I love this one. It may be short, but this is so awesome!! I absolutly love the picture also, it so adorable. Te poem that you wrote is perfect for the picture and it is really sweet. Well, I have to go, off to the state tournament I'll have to catch you later.
~*Chelsea*~
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